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Re:POEMS 13 years 10 months ago #16062

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[/quote]Hi katy,,

you're welcome..
just want to see poems from others that's why I started this..


Katy want to see more from you...=)

til you're next one..=)


muah[/quote]

hi jaymie...

wow :woohoo: that i actually my line hehe....Till ur next one...

ur actually looking forward for something from me now.... haha its really cool... i hope i can meet u too so i could write something for u... well i hope i could write a haiku a day since my haikus are based on my mood and happenings throughout the day...

@ nadj

Thank u very much for sharing...its all about being a woman...liked it very much
and yes the bday greeting is really YB inspired... ;)

@eve

tnx for sharing...kind of sad and full of regret...emotions are flowing in every stanza pls tell ur friend that i liked it so much tnx ;)
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Re:POEMS 13 years 10 months ago #16079

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to all the ladies and sunny thank you so much. I'll post again if time permits.

@eve

i like the poem your friend is crazy in love!! young love!!

now, when are we going to read yours? Im thinking of doing one for all the fathers since "Father's day" is coming soon. :lol:

or i have an idea : why don't we make a continues poem where everyone will contribute lets give it a title " My ideal Girl" the collection of Sukkie's ideal girl (it changes from noona to well someone ...........................else we know? :blush: )

we need to look again for his messages on his "ideal girl".

What do you think?
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Re:POEMS 13 years 10 months ago #16089

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that is a swell idea July, liking it so much. :)
oh please do share ur poems ladies. I prefer reading them and feeling the words too. Did some reading, on my volunteer work, they love it even young kids, especially older folks.

*honestly, no can do for me :lol: :lol: just like in letting others hear me sing korean songs... my friends crack up falling down their seats hysterically, .... and if we're in the mood for karaoke :lol: i just let it out, and everyone is on the floor laughing* and it is no joke, either.*

Please do share some more, and I promise u I'll read them next weekend to these sweet folks.
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Re:POEMS 13 years 10 months ago #16102

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Kat, i was laughing about the singing part. lol!! :lol:

How nice your reading these poems there. I'm happy :) Since youre reading it , i'll post another one, this will be my second poem. Not yet for fathers.


OLD FRIEND

Hi there old friend
It's been awhile
Still look so fine
after so much time

You seem so happy
with her on your side
glad that you do
to be honest, its true

All of a sudden............,
we stared at each other
mindful of people
crowding the hall

Few seconds.............
magical moment
unspoken words..........
what a comfort

Can it be?
lingers on me.
You still do?
that can't be true.

smile beaming your face
guess somehow didn't exist
in your eyes i saw mist
i believed i didn't miss

My hear is pounding
can't seem to move from where im standing
my hands are shaking
from too much wishing

Loving this thought
I guess im yearning
though this is nothing
but simply caring
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Re:POEMS 13 years 10 months ago #16105

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Sorry got confuse again it should be Eve not Kat.

im getting old
no matter what
i can't accept it
though its true
what to say
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!
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Re:POEMS 13 years 10 months ago #16108

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July, u r too much *an expression only* Hugs.
Kat or eve ... still brings a smile on me. Don't u worry. :)

oh, I love this poem "Old Friend" , honestly it is sweet and tender.
may I ask ur permission to add this one too to read to my volunteer group ? pretty please. Thanks again my dear friend. :)
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Re:POEMS 13 years 10 months ago #16109

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For a love that was LOST
I wish I could fly
To see you above the sky
I am somewhat blue
And of course you have no clue

Thinking of you makes me weak
And your absence is making me sick
Missing you is too much to bear
But holding you back, I would not dare

Hoping that I would not drown into sadness
And stop all this madness
I may not cross the line
Because in reality you could never be mine
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Re:POEMS 13 years 10 months ago #16111

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oh my dear Chocolate, this is a nice one too. I love it ! :)

may I add, this a bit sad, but the feelings are raw.
a deep emotion.

btw, may I also ask ur permission to include to my series of poems now, that i'll would be proud to read to my volunteer group. I could see their faces, the eagerness. :) I'll be like a proud sis to u, July and Jayme. :whistle:
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Re:POEMS 13 years 10 months ago #16112

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@eve
of course dear you may. Im happy that you like it. Here's another one kat made, beautiful also.

@katy
oh Katy i love your poem though its a little sad like you said. But i like it. keep posting im getting inspired all the way. Lets make a poem entitled "My ideal girl" inspired by Sukkie. (hehehe!!)
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Re:POEMS 13 years 10 months ago #16116

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nu2me wrote:
oh my dear Chocolate, this is a nice one too. I love it ! :)

may I add, this a bit sad, but the feelings are raw.
a deep emotion.

btw, may I also ask ur permission to include to my series of poems now, that i'll would be proud to read to my volunteer group. I could see their faces, the eagerness. :) I'll be like a proud sis to u, July and Jayme. :whistle:

@ eve
Thank you very much, i actually thinking of my first love while making this one :blush: it kind of bring back memories... i was young then... yes eve that was all mine that's why its raw and deep....this is why i stopped writing in a while i got so addicted to poetry
and cant control the emotions literally..... :P sure u may eve... ;)

@ nadj
thanks for liking it :) uhmm that would be a great idea but since sukkie is always changing his ideal girl once in a while it could be hard.... but if i concentrate with shin hye maybe i could make one ;) and ideal for me is reel...since its shinhye...i would rather make real hehe ... :lol: no worries ill construct something....
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