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My Noona is My Crush(short fanfic 1-5) 12 years 9 months ago #54613

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Jang Geun Suk as Kang Jung Sun
Park Shin Hye as Ahn Eun Jung
Lee Min Ho as Jang Min Kyung

From all the beautiful noonas in the school that jung sun, the handsome young prince, has befriended, he fell in love with a noona who is arrogant, and intelligent, Ahn Eun Jung. Eun Jung is someone whom everyone thought that has no friends at all when suddenly jung sun always follows her like a stalker while getting ignored and irritated by eun jung. Their friendship or..love(?) grew when eun jung's friend or a new more-hansome-than-jung sun-student has come to take eun jung from jung sun.

I miss you all! I hate being a high school student!


compare with a big box, seems like happiness is found in a small box :3
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Re: My Noona is My Crush(short fanfic 1-5) Chapter 1 12 years 9 months ago #54622

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Chapter 1

Jung Sun is always playing with his seniors/noonas after class as usual.

He felt like there was something or someone missing from his life to make him feel happy and all even though he is like a happy-go-lucky-boy with his noonas. He went home a with a frown on his face.

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His seniors were curious why jung sun has been frowning now a days without telling anyone.

"jung sun, is there a problem?" a senior asked.

jung sun quickly changed his expression as his senior talked to him.

"huh? no, there's no problem at all! i'm completely fine." jung sun lied.

"I don't believe you." his senior said.

"don't worry about me, noona. nothing's changed about me. you just don't see it." jung sun lied.

"fine i'll trust you this time but you know, I already told you that when there's a problem, don't hide it and you have to always tell us noonas. okay?" his senior said.

"I'll keep that in mind. don't worry about me!" jung sun cheerfully said but actually pretending to.

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jung sun mostly didn't listen to class that he didn't notice that classes has ended already and his senior is actually calling him.

"jung sun! jung sun!" his senior once again called him.

"oh! noona! were you calling me?"

"aren't you leaving your desk yet?" his senior asked like she's about to laugh.

"oh right! oh right! i'm coming!" jung sun cheerfully said.

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jung su and his senior walked together through the gate.

"hey, jung sun! do you want to meet our new classmate or should I say, your new noona?" his senior asked hoping for a yes.

"uh..erm..I have a lot of things to do so I'll just see you tomorrow." jung sun said as he walks off ahead of her.

"uhm..sure.." his senior murmured.

"phew! I hope noona won't get disappointed. but I also don't want to show her my depressed expression." jung sun said when suddenly..she bumped a girl whom he haven't met before and all her books fell on the floor.

"watch where you're going, kid." the girl arrogantly said.

"I'm really sorry." jung sun apologized even with her bad attitude and picked up her books.

"don't touch my things!" the girl said.

"but I just wanted to he-.." jung sun paused after staring at the girl's arrogant face.

"I see you met her by coincidence." his noona said.

"huh? is this..her?" jung sun asked.

"jung sun, meet the bitchy new student, Ahn Eun Jung."

"who are you calling bitch, freak?" eun jung asked as she's trying to scare her.





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Re: My Noona is My Crush(short fanfic 1-5) 12 years 9 months ago #54663

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Hey sachiko12, it's nice to see you again. :)

How is your school? Are you in summer break?

I always check your fanfic because I was expecting some update. Get some fun. :-V
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Re: My Noona is My Crush(short fanfic 1-5) 12 years 9 months ago #54782

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Humilis wrote:
Hey sachiko12, it's nice to see you again. :)

How is your school? Are you in summer break?

I always check your fanfic because I was expecting some update. Get some fun. :-V

I missed you humilis!! i didn't expect being a high schooler is so much work that there's no time for me to finish the ff. :cry

time passes and a hundred of fictional stories already filled in my head so i decided to make a short ff. :wahaha

you're really sweet humilis. I thought nobody would want to read my fanfics anymore so that's the other reason i stopped. :kiss1:

i hope there's some time to make again. :bye:


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Re: My Noona is My Crush(short fanfic 1-5)Chapter 2 12 years 9 months ago #54924

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Chapter 2

"noonas...plaease..please don't fight.." jung sun murmured.

"I clearly say it again. you. ANNOYINGLY. BITCH." his senior said.

(the senior is called Kim Hee Young)

"you really don't know who you're messing with." eun jung said as she gets closer to punch her.

"please stop.." jung sun murmured as he blocked eun jung.

"don't touch me kid" eun jung said with her eyes widen as she pushed jung sun to the wall.

hee young slapped her after she pushed jung sun like that.

"don't ever do that to jung sun!" hee young shouted.

"you're so weak. that didn't hurt at all even though you're boyfriend is so small." eun jung said.

"shut up!" hee young shouted.

"noona, let's just go please." jung sun said as he stood up.

"just listen to your kiddy boyfriend. you are no match for me." eun jung said as she starts to walk off.

"you get back here punk!" hee young ran but jung sun quickly stopped her as soon as she did.

"noona..please leave her...just for today..okay..?" jung sun said softly.

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Lee Min Jung as Kim Hee Young


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"young master, leaving so soon?" jung sun's maid said.

"yes. I don't know why I'm so happy today so i have to leave early to school today." jung sun said.

"but aren't you going to eat your breakfast, young master?"

"no need. I'll be going!" jung sun waved as he ran through the gate.

"hm..young master..?..in love..?" the maid thought.

-

jung sun goes up through the hill with a big happy face until he sees...

"oh! it's..!..uh..what was her name again..?" jung sun said when he saw the girl from yesterday.

-

hee young decides to head over at jung sun's place to go to school together.

"um, ahjumma, is jung sun still here?" hee young asked jung sun's maid.

"mianhaeyo, hee young'ssi. the young master left early without eating his breakfast."

"oh, is that so? then i'll just meet him at school."

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jung sun keeps following the girl(eun jung) until they made up to an area where they were the only ones there.

"do you think i'm too stupid that I won't notice you there?" eun jung said when she stopped.

"huh? so..you knew that I was following you..?" jung sun asked with a big shock on his face.

"It's really obvious. I heard you a while ago that you forgot my name and you even thought you were laughing so softly but the truth is you laugh so hard everyone including me can really hear it. and lastly, you're so close to me that there was a mirror awhile ago that I already knew you were following me. you're such a weirdo, kid." eun jung explained.

"ehehe..I thought I succeeded in following you secretly but I was too noisy that you already knew I was following from the beginning." jung sun said as he scratch his hair.

"so, stop following me then." eun jung said and starts to leave.

"wait! still, can I walk with you to school?" jung sun asked happily.

"and do you think I would say yes?" eun jung asked sarcastically.

jung sun sighed as he looked down.

"of course..you would say..no." jung sun said and starts to leave on the opposite direction.

"hey, why do you want to go to school to an arrogant girl like me? you should just go to your other noonas." eun jung said.

"I don't know. I'm always like this when it comes to befriending noonas." jung sun said.

"I'm not your friend nor would I like to be one." eun jung said.

"fine, I'll just go by myself" jung sun said.

jung sun starts to keep sniffing his nose to get eun jung's attention.

eun jung gets irritated.

"hey! if you're going to be like that then just do what you want then." eun jung said.

"does that mean I can walk with you!?" jung sun happily asked.

"If you're going to keep talking then I might change my mind." eun jung said.

jung sun ran to eun jung's side really close to her.

"don't come too close" eun jung said.

"sorry.." jung sun apologized.

-

hee young was waiting in front of the gate for jung sun.

"where is he?"

hee young suddenly saw jung sun and eun jung walking together that made hee young's heart break and starts to hide from being able to be seen.

"so you're a classmate of hee young noona?" jung sun asked.

"isn't it obvious?" eun jung asked.

"ehehehe..sorry noona" jung sun said.

"don't call me noona. it's really irritating for you saying noona to everyone who is older than you." eun jung said.

"then what should I call you?" jung sun asked.

"I mean you have to call me...ugh. did you ever notice when you say noona in front of every noona, they'll get confused because they don't know who you are referring to?" eun jung said.

"now that you said it, yes I did realize it." jung sun said.

"what about calling me eun jung noona?" eun jung said.

"eun..jung..noo..na. eun jung noona. yes! I understand!" jung sun said

"good, then I shall leave you then." eun jung said as she starts to walk ahead of him.

not letting him realize that she actually smiled for the very first time.


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Re: My Noona is My Crush(short fanfic 1-5) 12 years 9 months ago #54945

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sachiko12 wrote:
Humilis wrote:
Hey sachiko12, it's nice to see you again. :)

How is your school? Are you in summer break?

I always check your fanfic because I was expecting some update. Get some fun. :-V

I missed you humilis!! i didn't expect being a high schooler is so much work that there's no time for me to finish the ff. :cry

time passes and a hundred of fictional stories already filled in my head so i decided to make a short ff. :wahaha

you're really sweet humilis. I thought nobody would want to read my fanfics anymore so that's the other reason i stopped. :kiss1:

i hope there's some time to make again. :bye:



dear sachiko12: i was one lurker in this fanfic forum but never post any comments, please forgive me for not doing that and make you think nobody reads your fanfic. you are so young and talented, please keep writing but remember school comes first. i'll be waiting for your update on your every single fanfic. sachiko12 fighting:heartsh: :heartsh: :heartsh:
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Re: My Noona is My Crush(short fanfic 1-5) 12 years 9 months ago #54959

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@sachiko12

like jgslvspsh i like your fun fics & always read it (as i could remember :silly: :silly: ) but never speak out my appreciation...sorry :shy:
anyways, dont be disappointed & continue writing. you certainly have the talent to be a future writer :willing
write all you want coz there's always someone who is willing to read it...for there are those can't write---read.:-V :D :D :D kidding
also,as jgslvspsh said school must comes first.:bingo:
i'll be waiting for the next chapters...:P :P :P
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Re: My Noona is My Crush(short fanfic 1-5)Chapter 3 12 years 9 months ago #55054

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Chapter 3

jung sun has been jumping happily this time that all the students keep staring at him.

"hey jung sun, what happened to you from last time? last time you were always frowning but now you're so giggly like a girl." a senior said to jung sun in the cafeteria.

"huh? well, I don't know. maybe because the cafeteria's beef today is so delicious from yesterday." jung sun said.

"but the beef today is just the same from yesterday, jung sun."

"really? I don't know. maybe because we've got no homework?" jung sun said.

"your teacher informed me you've got a load of homeworks."

"eh? then, maybe because I've got a high score in a quiz today." jung sun said.

"since there is homeworks today, then it means your class didn't take any quiz today."

"noona, why are you defending my answers?" jung sun asked with a bright smile.

"but jung sun, why don't you just tell us why you're so happy today compared to last time?"

"hmm.."

"I don't know" the noonas said in chorus as if they already know what jung sun is going to say.

"hey, that's not what I'm going to say. I was about to say I do-...umm....I mean..I...I..I..um...I give up." jung sun said while putting both his hands above his head.

"I knew you would say that"

"you're no fair noona." jung sun said and starts to eat him beef in order to ignore them."

"eun jung noona is much better than other noonas." jung sun said to his mind.

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Dismissal Time

hee young was waiting for jung sun to come out from his class so she could tell him if she can go home with him. she saw him close to the door and started to confront him when suddenly..

jung saw eun jung close to the other door so jung sun decided to secretly follow eun jung by going through that door.

hee young saw the scene so she just decided to go home by herself again.

"hey kid, I know you're following me again." eun jung said.

"heh! oh man! I thought I'd fooled you." jung sun said.

eun jung gave him her quiz papers and as jung sun took it, his eyes widen when he sees the paper with all perfect scores.

"so do you think it will be easy to fool me?" eun jung threaten.

"you're so cool, eun jung noona!" jung sun said happily as he gave back her quiz paper.

eun jung smiled again as she took her quiz paper while facing back at jung sun.

"shut up, kid." eun jung said.

"why do you keep calling me kid? don't you know I have a name?"

"Ofcourse you have a name, stupid. I just don't know it nor do I want to know." eun jung said calmly.

"My name is-.." jung sun starts to tell her his name when eun jung...

"shut up. I already told you I don't want to know it, stupid kid." eun jung said.

"but you can't just call me kid or stupid or even stupid kid." jung sun said

eun jung ignored him and walked ahead of him.

"hey! wait for me! I want to come with you!" jung sun shouted as he ran to catch up with eun jung.

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jung sun have been following her for an hour and he already reached to a street where it's dark and quiet.

"I wonder where is she? she sure is fast.." jung sun said.

"hey look here! a kid has entered in our territory!" a guy said from behind.

"huh! who was that?"

jung sun looked at the back and saw a bunch of big guys chasing him then suddenly..

eun jung held his hand!~

"run!" eun jung shouted.

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eun jung and jung sun stopped when they noticed that they got away.

"we sure got away with them." jung sun said that made them both laugh.

"to be honest, it sure was fun.." eun jun said as she pants.

now, eun jung is starting to have affections over jung sun...

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6 months later..

"eun jung noona! are you ready to go?" jung sun shouted in front of eun jung's house.

"you don't need to rush! we're not even late yet!" eun jung shouted back.

"Then I'll wait for you even if it takes a long time to go through!" jung sun shouted back that made eun jung confused about what he just said.


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Re: My Noona is My Crush(short fanfic 1-5) 12 years 9 months ago #55056

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Thank you for your :touched comments everyone and even those who liked my chapters! :touched

now I understand, how much you liked them but I just didn't realize it. I'm such a fool.

of course that's why I didn't come back for so long because I'm just too busy for my school so I just made time to show you my new ideas.

ANNYEONG!~ :bye:


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Re: My Noona is My Crush(short fanfic 1-5) 12 years 9 months ago #55106

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hi sachiko 12.... i am new members this forum,i like to read your fanfics,please update next chapter soon thanks....
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