Is this the right place to post fanmade music and lyrics? If not, mods please move to the correct location. In advance, kamsahamnida or mianhae!

Here's my own take at what Go Mi Nyu and Hwang Tae Kyung should sing as a new single for their Japan FM.
Comments welcome!

Uri Sarang / Our Love


Intro (Spoken/Whisper):
You and me, Together
Who could have guessed?
With all the chances that seemed to have slipped away
Who would’ve known it will be like this today?

Stanza I (Male)
Your face brings back a flood of memories
From years ago
I just had no clue
Each meeting was just a casual encounter
How could I have known it would be you?
Now your smile is what makes my day
Your voice is what makes me stay
Your light gets me through rough nights
Your warmth melts my cold heart
Mianhae, I used to think I could conquer the world alone
But I don’t really have to
Now that I got you
Stay by my side

Chorus:

Our love (Uri Sarang)
Made the rain stop
Our love (Uri Sarang)
Is more than enough
Our love (Uri Sarang)
Is life’s beautiful surprise
Our love (Uri Sarang)
Is not just between you and me
Because all the world can see
Our love (Uri Sarang)
 
Stanza II: (Female Voice)
Your tender glances and
Stolen kisses
Your playful words
Drew my heart to yours
My silent tears
And short-lived heartbreaks
Made me realize I could feel

Gwaenchanayo, getting here was not easy
But still I can’t believe this is real
Yes, I’ll stay with you

Repeat Chorus


Bridge to Outro: (Together)

Saranghae.
Jeongmal saranghae.

Together, you and me.
Being happy with you.
Feeling everything with you.
Seeing our dreams come true.
Nae. Jeongmal saranghae.

Wowww. Thanks. This is fantastic work.
Two thumbs up !!
Duet song!!
The lyric is great but I don't know the melody so I can't sing along.

Amazing... It'll be a great song for them

Thanks earthprincess

yo earthprincess, luv dos words on dat song! it 'll b nice if KS & SH can both sing a duet of it!! i hav a great idea!!
y dnt u send a request to them to sing dis song ?? btw where did u get dat song? or did u make it urself?

cos if u did, wow , im really amazed by ur talent at song writing meby u cn do dis songwriting thingy as a side income anyhw, keep up da gd work

Dorothy, this is really, really good, I wish I can hear it being sang right now. You, Raine, Jane, Jessica and even Maize with her spazzing, I envy your talents. Thank you for sharing. The lyrics is really awesome. You think you can ask someone to sing it and post it here too? Now I know I am asking too much but light like this should not be hidden under the bushel or bushes (however the saying goes), right?

wow.. Dorothy! this is super fast.. n beautiful words..

i must get Maize n d rest to look out for this!

Awww, before I comment, could I just spazz at your lyrics, Dorothy? XD

Love it!! I've always, always, wanted to see them do a duet. Sigh... Do you play the guitar, too? Or piano? It would be great to have music composed for these lyrics. Could ask someone to do it, but I'm sure while you were writing this, a melody was playing in your mind (I have those moments, sadly, i'm like a jack of all trades, master of none when it comes to musical instruments.

This is great!!!

Thanks for the nice comments guys!

Admittedly, I have times when I am lyrically gifted but all the time I am musically challenged, kekeke...

Yes, maize, a melody was playing on my mind. I was also singing/humming it in the shower before I went to work today. But I bet if I sang that to my musician friend, who collaborates with me on this stuff, she'd just laugh at me for my sad and desperate attempt at a melody.

But, her brother did indulge me with my silly melody and he thought that it will probably sound better if I try to write the music with it translated in Hangul (haha, yes that's a gentle insult to my melody I think, kekeke!) I agree with him though. I wrote the lyrics thinking it will be translated and metered in Hangul (kind of backward-thinking I know, the translation came first before the metering).

I guess I can open it up to the PSHIC sisterhood to collaborate with me on this on either of the following:
1 - translate in Hangul/Romanji
or
2 - write the melody in its English form

Anyone interested?

Thanks again everyone. So, I might actually be able to put a tune to this in its English form. Stay "tuned", may take a while, but I'm on it.

If anyone is still interested to translate in Hangul or create a melody or just collaborate, I'm still open to that. Just let me know!