jossa-chan, luv ur fan-poems!! when i 1st read it at ur blogspot, it never register in my mind as a fan poetry bt a persective thoughts ff frm a 3rd party POV a big salute n a big hug to u for another wonderful brilliant piece of mind work

Mee, yeah, she made me wait because, uh, she got the hour and the number of building mixed up. i just didn't want to see her again for another day so i waited oh-so-patiently verging on annoyance. i guess i knew SH's feelings because i've felt it before. haha. i mean, who didn't?

Maizey, i thought you mods would tell me to take this down on this thread becoz i realized belatedly that it's a fanfic thread so technically, poetry doesn't fit in here...but, i love it here and i want it to be here. so sorry if i made a trangression.

Kyonkichi, elhabe, dita and juhichi, thank you thank you for appreciating my poem. actually, i'd like to believe that i do more decent poems than fictions/stories. poetry is my first love.

Kamsahamnida guys!

Great poem!!! Love.

Thanks for sharing.

Poets in the heezy!! Yay!!

Dear Raine, I am super touched by this!!
Thank you sooooooooooo much!!!!! I feel so honor!!!
*HUGS*

tq Raine..! d words r so beautiful indeed. towards d last line of d poem, i'm imagining she's waiting by d window in a warm room during a winter cold weather, it wud b great if someone special wud gv her dat warm hugs while enjoying d beautiful sunset in winter..

hi jossa,
thank you for the lovely poem... yes u really captured the whole inner feelings of SH in ur FF... it is really touching and full of love

a big thanks for this... i miss writing poetry too

jossa, mods am so sorry but i donnot know how to cut and quote so am just copy/pasting it okay?

this is the best part for me...

"She cares
She breathes
She loves...
Him."

jossa you make my heart ache!

thank you!

Ate Elvie, we are sooo cosmic. Those were the same words that rendered me speechless. My heart ached, too... but it was the beautiful kind.

vira65 wrote:
Hi vira, those are also my favorite lines. I've always wanted to love someone that way. and i want, wish, hope that SH loves Sukkie that way and vice versa.

and by the rate things are going right now (with the new hand-holding photos) i think my wish has a good probability to turn real.

*waves* to everyone who commented. thanks!

Raine, See the work that you can come up with and that is when you are getting bored waiting for somebody to show up. I wonder what kind of magic you can weave if you go on sabbatical leave and just concentrate on spinning yarns of lovely stories. Just a thought.