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Re:The Gilded Cage (In Progress) 14 years 3 months ago #3148

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oh what to do, what to do ?

liking The Gilded Cage so far. no one saw the "princess" Yok Soon Jin face before, . wow a predicament "the intruder" is in. :ohmy:

Very good so far... Jessicaaron will be waiting for next chapter. great writing !
Thanks so much. :)
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Re:The Gilded Cage (In Progress) 14 years 3 months ago #3172

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Chapter 3
Frustrated by the quandary, which she had created for herself, Eun Jung buried her face into her hands, sighed and quietly asked, “Yoo Eun Jung, out of all of the rooms at this inn; why did you have to sneak into this one?” Unable to hear what the Princess was saying, one of the maids asked, “Princess Soo Jin, do you have an edict for us?” Lifting her face from her hands, Eun Jung looked vacantly at the maids and inquired, “What’s an edict?” Not sure what to make of the question, one of maids smiled nervously and hesitated before asking, “Are you inquiring about the definition of the word?” Nodding her head, Eun Jung replied, “Yes, I’m asking you what that word means.” Sensing that the Princess was becoming annoyed, the maid quickly explained, “An edict is like an order or a proclamation.”

Upon hearing the definition, Eun Jung let out a long sigh before asking, “Then why didn’t you just use one of those words instead?” Ignoring the perplexed expressions on the faces of the maids, Eun Jung proceeded to think about what she could ask them to do. When she set her sights on the box containing the jewelry, Eun Jung jumped out of her seat, took hold of it and said, “I do have an edict for you.” Waving for one of the maids to come over, Eun Jung handed her the box and ordered, “Have someone take that box to the Precious Life Orphanage and make sure you tell them to give it to the Orphan Keeper.” The maid looked down at the box in her hands and asked, “Princess Soo Jin, why would you want to give away the dowry, which Prince JiangSu had especially prepared for you?

Recognizing the absurdity of her own edict, Eun Jung scrambled to come up with a plausible reason for wanting to give away the dowry and finally answered, “I wish to do a good deed before I enter the Palace. I believe that doing this will bring good fortune to my future husband and his family.” Staring at the Princess with a new found sense of admiration, the maid joyfully exclaimed, “Princess Soo Jin; that is so thoughtful of you.” Coming upon the realization that she could pass along her tidings to the people at the orphanage; Eun Jung asked, “Should I include a short letter to provide a bit of encouragement to those poor little orphans?” Both of the maids agreed that it was a good idea to include a letter and set out to prepare the proper writing tools for the Princess’s endeavors.

After she examined the elaborate writing station, which the maids had set up, Eun Jung asked, “Where’s the charcoal stick?” Seeing their confused expressions, Eun Jung falsely explained to the maids that, “In my kingdom, we don’t use brushes and ink to write letters. We use charcoal sticks instead.” Upon hearing the Princess’s preferred writing tool, the maids left the room to ask the inn keeper where they would be able to obtain a charcoal stick. When they returned, one of the maids handed Eun Jung a whittled charcoal stick and asked, “Will this do?” With a contented smile, Eun Jung nodded her head and replied, “That’s just perfect.”

As she sat thinking about what she should write, Eun Jung noticed that the maids were peering over her shoulders. Recognizing that the letter could be read by someone other than the person for whom it was intended; Eun Jung decided that she would need to make the letter as cryptic as possible. After figuring out what she wanted to convey to everyone at the orphanage, Eun Jung proceeded to write the following passage:

“Hello everyone,
I wanted to pass along my best wishes for your health and well-being. Although, I’m not with you physically; you will always be on my mind and in my heart. Please wish me luck as I embark on this path that fate has seemingly carved out for me. Trust that I will always endure and will one day achieve my goals!
Yours always,”

Faced with the problem of not being able to sign the letter using her real name, Eun Jung tried to figure out what method she could use to indicate that she had written it. Recalling that the Orphan Keeper had always been aware of her inordinate fondness for fireflies, Eun Jung proceeded to draw a picture of a twinkling firefly at the end of her letter. Observing the unique way the Princess had ended her letter, one of the maids asked, “Princess Soo Jin, may I ask why you drew a firefly at the end of your letter?” With an endearing smiled on her face, Eun Jung replied, “Because fireflies share their gift of light with the rest of the world without wanting a single thing in return.”

Once she had sealed the letter, Eun Jung handed it to one of the maids, who excused herself to give the items to the guards for delivery. Seeing that it was getting late, the remaining maid suggested, “Princess Soo Jin, you should rest early tonight. The royal matchmaker will be here tomorrow to prepare you for the wedding rituals.” Eun Jung’s face soured upon hearing the mention of her upcoming nuptials and asked, “Since I’m a Princess, I assume that I’m supposed to marry a Prince right?” Smiling at the Princess’s strange question, the maid replied, “Of course. In two days, you will marry the Crowned Prince of Korea.” Curious as to what the Prince as like, Eun Jung asked, “Is the Prince a nice person?” Pausing slightly, the maid replied, “I’m not allowed to critique any member of the royal family.” Upon hearing the maid’s response, Eun Jung thought to herself, “That must mean that he’s not a nice person.”

After the remaining maid took her leave, Eun Jung walked over to the bed, laid down and quickly fell asleep. Early the next morning, Eun Jung was awakened by the shrill sound of the royal matchmaker’s voice. Although, the royal matchmaker had repeatedly stressed that the wedding rituals were important, Eun Jung could not focus her attention on anything that the woman was saying. Enduring what she felt was the longest day of her life, Eun Jung found herself being poked, prodded and pestered by the annoying little woman. Once the royal matchmaker had completed all of the pre-wedding rituals, she took her leave after instructing the maids to prepare the Princess for her final flower bath as a single woman.

Staring at the wooden tub full of water in the middle of the room, Eun Jung asked, “Am I supposed to go in there?” Setting up a screen around the tub, one of the maids replied, “Yes you have to go in there. You won’t have time to bathe tomorrow, so you must do it now.” With an exasperated sigh, Eun Jung disrobed and made her way into the tub. Shortly after she was immersed in the water, Eun Jung thought she heard the door to her room swing open and called out, “Chun Hei is that you?” Much to her dismay, Eun Jung heard Chun Hei ask loudly, “Prince JiangSu what are you doing here?” Looking down at herself, Eun Jung was relieved that she had decided to bathe with her undergarments on but still wondered what the Prince was doing in her room at such a late hour.

Realizing that the Prince was intent on advancing into the room, Chun Hei stepped in front of him and exclaimed frantically, “Prince JiangSu you can’t be here!” Ignoring the maid’s proclamations, Prince JiangSu glared at her and asked coldly, “When was it the place of a maid to tell me where I can and can’t be?” With a deep bow, the frightened maid quickly moved out of the Prince’s way. Observing the screen in the middle of the room, Prince JiangSu asked, “Is she behind there?” Chun Hei nodded her head to indicate to the Prince that the Princess was indeed behind the screen.

Having received the maid’s confirmation, Prince JiangSu made his way over to the screen and pushed it slightly to the side to reveal the wooden bathtub. Much to his surprise, he did not see his future bride and walked closer to examine the tub. Peering into the tub, Prince JiangSu was amused to discover that his Princess had completely immersed herself in the water. Folding his arms, Prince JiangSu said, “Let’s see how long you can stay underwater.” Feeling her chest tighten from the lack of air, Eun Jung finally could not stand it any longer and raised her head from beneath the water.

Observing his future bride gasp for air, Prince JiangSu asked incredulously, “Am I really supposed to believe that you’re the renowned beauty everyone has been telling me about?” Offended by the Prince’s thinly veiled criticism, Eun Jung replied defiantly, “I’m glad that no one told me that you were handsome; or else I think I’d be really disappointed.” Astonished by her insolence, Prince JiangSu asked pointedly, “Do you know who you’re talking to?” Seeing that the Prince was staring intently at her, Eun Jung crossed her arms to cover herself, and replied, “I’m talking to an intruder who barges into the chambers’ of an unwed woman to peep at her as she bathes.”

Eun Jung’s statement alerted the Prince as to the indecency of his actions, which caused him to quickly turn away from her. Angered by her insinuations, Prince JiangSu exclaimed, “Get this straight, I’m not an intruder, I’m your future husband!” Upset that the Prince was still unwilling to admit to his wrongdoings, Eun Jung replied, “You get this straight, as of today you’re still an intruder!” Speechless for the first time in his life, Prince JiangSu wondered where his royal parents had found such a Princess for him to wed.
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Re:The Gilded Cage (In Progress) 14 years 3 months ago #3173

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I love your story here, jessica..thank you so much for sharing and for stirring our love for GS and SH....

please update soon, i'd like to know what will happen when they meet for the first time...ha ha ha...
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Re:The Gilded Cage (In Progress) 14 years 3 months ago #3175

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Woohoo, thanks for the chapter update.
Hahaha, so like Prince JiangSu to burst in on her.
So awesome Eun Jung isn't going to take his insolent behavoir.
I can't wait to see what happens next.
Thanks, jessicaaron!
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Re:The Gilded Cage (In Progress) 14 years 3 months ago #3203

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yay! they finally met! looks like they don't like each other ^^
thanks for da update! :)
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Re:The Gilded Cage (In Progress) 14 years 3 months ago #3208

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I LOVE IT!! great exchanges btw Prince JiangSu and Eun Jung.

it is funny and warm, kind and smarty.

Eun Jung drew a firefly
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Re:The Gilded Cage (In Progress) 14 years 3 months ago #3271

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Chapter 4

Astonished that her words were not enough to force Prince JiangSu out of the room; Eun Jung furrowed her brows and asked her maid, “Would you please escort that intruder out; so that I can get out of my bath?” Glancing back at Eun Jung, once she had finished her rhetorical question, Prince JiangSu folded his arms and proclaimed, “I came here to discuss something important with you; so I won’t be leaving until I’ve done so.” Turning to the maid, Prince JiangSu asked brusquely, “Are you going to help her out of there or did you want me to do it?” Before the frightened maid could produce a response, Eun Jung declared, “I’ve decided that I haven’t finished my bath yet; so I don’t need anyone’s help to get out.” Having made her bold declaration; Eun Jung proceeded to leisurely glide her hands over the floating flower petals, to indicate that she was still taking pleasure in her bath.

Upon seeing Eun Jung’s altered demeanor, Prince JiangSu asked in an amused tone, “Is that so?” Unsure as to the meaning of his question, Eun Jung observed a snide smile appear on his face and watched apprehensively as he made his way back over to her bathtub. Running his right hand over the water on the surface of her bath, Prince JiangSu observed, “Since you seem to be enjoying yourself so much, I’ll wait patiently until you decide to come out.” Flicking the excess water on his hand into her face, Prince JiangSu continued to say, “Let’s just hope that you decide to come out of there before this water gets too cold.” With beads of water dripping down her face, Eun Jung glared at the Prince and wished that she could immediately jump out of the tub to give him a good beating.

Seeing that he had gotten a rise out of her, Prince JiangSu laughed before proceeding to make his way over to the table to take a seat. Eun Jung watched as the Prince drummed his fingers on the table and looked around nervously at the water in her bathtub. As was to be expected, the water in Eun Jung’s bath soon became tepid before quickly turning cold. Wrapping her arms around herself to preserve what little heat was still present; Eun Jung’s teeth began to involuntarily chatter together, creating an undeniably distinct sound. Upon hearing the sound, Prince JiangSu turned to her and asked, “Are you through being stubborn yet?” Taking a deep breath, Eun Jung clasped her hands over her mouth and puffed her hot breath into them before proceeding to shake her head vehemently.

Bearing witness to Eun Jung’s impossible obstinacy, Prince JiangSu began to worry that she would become ill, if she insisted on remaining in the cold bath. Having had enough of her childish behavior, Prince JiangSu decided that he would need to do something drastic to get her out. Upon seeing the Prince make his way over to her, Eun Jung braced herself for the worst but was surprised when he walked right past her. Eun Jung turned around in the tub to see what he was up to and watched incredulously as the Prince forcefully opened all of the side windows in the room. Immediately feeling the cold night air pierce through her already cold body, Eun Jung cried out in discomfort. Signaling for the maid to help the Princess out of the bath, Prince JiangSu ordered, “Get her out of there right now!”

While the maid helped Eun Jung out of the bath, Prince JiangSu turned around to close all of the windows. Refocusing his attention on his shivering Princess, Prince JiangSu walked over to the bed and pulled down the blanket. Tossing the blanket to the maid, Prince JiangSu instructed, “Use that to wrap her up and take her over there to change into some dry clothes.” As he waited for her to get dressed, Prince JiangSu lit a portable heat lamp and placed it on the table. After Eun Jung was properly dressed, the maid rushed over to the Prince and reported, “Princess Soo Jin is wearing dry clothes now.” Slightly turning to face the maid, Prince JiangSu asked, “What are you still doing here? Go get some ginger soup to warm her up.” Realizing that she had failed to anticipate the Princess’s needs, the maid bowed deeply and replied, “Yes, Prince JiangSu, I’ll get the soup right away.”

When they were alone in the room, Prince JiangSu turned to Eun Jung and ordered gruffly, “Come over here right now.” Staring at him hatefully, Eun Jung ignored his decree and remained still on her bed. Seeing that she was fully intent on disobeying him, Prince JiangSu stood up, walked over to her bed and grabbed her arm. Paying no heed to Eun Jung’s volatile resistance, Prince JiangSu dragged her over to the table and forced her to take a seat. Pulling her arm away from his grasp, Eun Jung asked in a heated tone, “What do you want now?!” Disregarding Eun Jung’s belligerence, Prince JiangSu took a hold of her hand and extended it closer towards the heat lamp. Observing that she was calming down, Prince JiangSu let go of her hand and ordered, “Put the other one over there.”

Realizing that there were good intentions behind his severe treatment of her, Eun Jung did as he ordered and moved her other hand closer to the heat lamp. Observing Eun Jung turn her palms away from the heat lamp to warm the other side, Prince JiangSu inquired, “Is it always going to be this difficult to get you to listen to me?” Unsure as to how she should respond to the question, Eun Jung suddenly remembered that the Prince had mentioned wanting to discuss something and asked, “What did you want to discuss that was so important that you wouldn’t even allow me take a proper bath?” Annoyed by Eun Jung’s pointed question, Prince JiangSu shook his head before replying, “I came here to discuss the terms of our marriage.” Before she could respond, Eun Jung observed her maid re-enter the room with a small bowl on a wooden tray. After the maid placed the bowl down on the table, Prince JiangSu quickly dismissed her by saying, “You can leave now. Don’t come back in here unless Princess Soo Jin calls for you.” After acknowledging the Prince’s orders, the maid quickly took her leave.

Sliding the bowl closer to Eun Jung, Prince JiangSu demanded, “Finish all of that. It’ll warm you up.” Seeing that she was about to protest, Prince JiangSu threatened her by saying, “If I hear a single peep from you, I’ll pour that down your throat.” Thinking that he would probably follow through with his threat, Eun Jung frowned and reluctantly began to drink the ginger soup. Watching her grimace as she drank the soup, Prince JiangSu turned his attention to more important matters and said, “A source of mine tells me that you have already given your heart to some man from your kingdom.” Upon hearing his statement, Eun Jung put down her spoon and asked, “If you already know that, then why are you still forcing me to marry you?” To which, he replied, “You’re not the only one being forced into this marriage.”

Observing that she did not comprehend his response, Prince JiangSu explained, “As the Crowned Prince of Korea, it is my duty to ensure that my country and its’ citizens are protected. Marrying you will ensure that both of our kingdoms will cease engaging in any further destructive wars. Our wedded union will serve to spare hundreds of thousands of lives.” Stunned by the Prince’s admission, Eun Jung wondered what would happen if it became known that the real Princess had already absconded with her lover.

Seeing that Eun Jung was deep in thought, Prince JiangSu continued to say, “I came here to tell you to forget everything about your past and focus on becoming Korea’s future Queen. Today you have a duty to your people; tomorrow you will bear an additional duty to me and my people.” Observing the vacant expression on Eun Jung’s face, Prince JiangSu asked, “Soo Jin, do you understand everything that I’ve said to you?” Nodding her head, Eun Jung replied weakly, “I understand that there’s no possible way to turn back now.”
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Re:The Gilded Cage (In Progress) 14 years 3 months ago #3273

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Woohoo. Can't wait to read it. So excited!!

edit:
Wow, there's really no way out now for Eun Jung.
Prince JiangSu is nicer than he lets on; not wanting Eun Jung to get sick.
And he cares about his country.

Thanks, jessicaaron619!!
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Re:The Gilded Cage (In Progress) 14 years 3 months ago #3277

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i can just picture how GS looked at her while she was immersed in the lukewarm water...

ok, i can't wait till they actually get married...ha ha ha...

would like to know what will happen on that fated night...

jessica, i will patiently await your next ep...thanks!
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