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Re: An Annoying Girl 13 years 2 months ago #37450

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sorry for keeping you wait :-V
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Chapter 5

"oppa...why did you..." hye seon mumbled to geun suk.

"she is my girlfriend" geun suk said to hye seon that made shin hye's eyes grow big and shocked. :OMG

"mwo?" hye seon wondered. :cry

"mianhaeyo, hye seon. we are friends, we are close but, i never wanted you to be mine in the beginning." geun suk said in an uncomfortable look.

"mwo?....oppa....ani...geun suk'ssi...do you really think of me that way?" hye seon asked while tears kept on falling on her face. :cry

geun suk was about to leave the party but, hye seon stopped him.

"oppa, you really think of me that way?" hye seon said with blurry eyes.

"i only think of you as a sister but, i never wanted you to call me as your brother." geun suk said to her.

geun suk went home leaving hye seon alone crying on the streets.

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"aishh!! why did she appear there so suddenly!" geun suk wondered.

"wait, the question is...why did i kiss shin hye?" geun suk wondered.

"aishh!!" geun suk was pissed and kept on rubbing his hair.

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"shin hye'ah...mianhae about what happened a while ago, i didn't know that hye seon'ah would come by so suddenly." hyun joong appologized.

"umm..it's..ik...umm..." shin hye mumbled.

"geun suk shouldn't be like that to her girlfriend you know!!" :angry1 shin hye shouted that made hyun joong :S .

"hehehe, just kidding =D it's okay but, that hye shin girl is very bad mannered by just crashing at our house, you know" shin hye said. =X

"don't joke around like that, shin hye" hyun joong told her with a embarassed look.

"hehehe, sorry hyun joong'ssi" :-V shin hye said.

"her name is hye seon, she is in love with geun suk for as long as i can remember." hyun joong told shin hye.

"does geun suk'ssi know?" shin hye asked curiously.

"he knows but, his very pissed off to think that his close friend is in love with him" hyun joong said.

"he...doesn't like girls who likes him and is his close friend?" shin hye asked him.

"that's right" hyun joong said.

"geun suk'ssi must have a tough life huh" shin hye said while staring at the ground.

"he is ey?" hyun joong wondered.

both of them kept on thinking how will geun suk's situation will be.

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hyun joong started his engine on his car and is about to leave.

"i had a fun time at your party, shin hye'ssi" hyun joong said to her happily. :)

"kumawaeyo, hyun joong'ssi" shin hye said to him happily. :side:


"listen..shin hye'ssi" hyun joong said.

"i'm going to America next week, so..." hyun joong said.

"you don't have to say that, we're not even that close, you know" shin hye said to him. :P

"well, if i didn't tell you that i'm going to America next week, you might be wondering why i disappeared so suddenly." hyun joong explained.

"i guess" shin hye said. :unsure:

"well, see you later, shin hye'ssi" hyun joong said.

"you know, we should talk to each other without being politely to our names" shin hye said.

"then i should call you shin hye'ah" hyun joong said.

"and i'll call you..." hyun joong interrupted shin hye when she was about to think a name of him.

"call me oppa" hyun joong grinned.

"no way!" shin hye shouted.

"hehehe :-V just kidding" hyun joong said.

"well, now we're even." shin hye said.

"well, see you later, shin hye" hyun joong said with a smile.

"see you...uhh..." shin hye said.

"hyun joong" shin hye continued.

hyun joong smiled at her but he still hopes that someday that she can finally call him "oppa".

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the next week, shin hye went to the airport and saw hyun joong waiting for someone.

"hyun joong!" shin hye surprised hyun joong.

"oh! shin hye you surprised me!" hyun joong said.

"were you waiting for geun suk'ssi?" shin hye asked.

"geun suk is already there" hyun joong said while pointing to geun suk.

"ohhh...then, who are you waiting for? hye seon'ssi?" shin hye asked.

"she's obviously in a bad situation right now, shin hye" hyun joong said.

"then who are you waiting for?" shin hye asked curiously.

"you, shin hye!" hyun joong shouted.

"ah-..ahhhh...mianhae, hyun joong." shin hye said and looked down to him.

"i'm already late but, i'm still waiting for you to come." hyun joong said.

"yah! you should go now! you shouldn't just wait for me!" shin hye shouted.

"alasseo! alasseo! i'm going, shin hye" hyun joong said and as he go, he glances at shin hye with her sweet smile.

"see you, hyun joong!" shin hye said.

geun suk kept on watching them both.

" *humph* it's that girl again. wait, why am i acting this way? aishh!" geun suk said to himself.

geun suk didn't notice that shin hye had already left the airport and he just kept on talking to himself.

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"eomma! eomma!" shin hye kept on calling her mom.

"shin hye'ah, what is it?" shin hye's mom asked.

"why is our luggage here beside the door?" shin hye asked curiously.

"shin hye, can i talk for you for a second" her mom said while leading her to a seat.

"what is it, mom?" shin hye asked.

"there is a very crazy prisoner who got escaped and is near at our street and the police have said that we have to move our things and move to a friend's house who is far away from here." her mom explained to her clearly.

"do you know any of your friends who is far away?" her mom asked her.

"i know one, but he is in america" shin hye said.

"oh! how about...but, i don't know his number." shin hye sadly said.

"hmmm...i know! we'll ask my friend if he has another house we can live for a while." her mom said.

"another house?" shin hye wondered.

"he is the manager of the famous singers, Jang Geun Suk & Kim Hyun Joong...wait..weren't those who are the ones who attended your party?" her mom said.

"really? he is a friend of yours?" shin hye asked.

her mom nodded."let me call him and ask him if he has another house we can live." her mom said.

shin hye's mom called the manager and was delighted to have them live at one of his' house.

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shin hye and her mom packed their things and moved to one of the manager's house.

"long time no see, dong sup." shin hye's mom greeted her friend.

"hye sun! long time no see!" dong sup said.

shin hye's mom explained everything and even asked him if they can stay one of his houses.

"of course! i''l lead you to my house." dong sup said.

dong sup leaded them to his house.

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"here we are!" dong sup remimnded them.

"eomma...that house is so...big!" shin hye whispered to her mom.

"i hope you weren't thinking that it's too big" dong sup said.

"oh not at all! kumawaeyo for letting us live in one of your houses" her mom said.

"no problem, i'd be worried if that criminal went to you and your daughter, hye sun" dong sup said.

hye sun smiled and gave thanks again to dong sup then he went off and waved good-bye to them.

"let's pack our things shin hye" her mom said and so shin hye did.

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a few hours later...

hye sun saw the refrigerator empty and thought that she could just go grocery shopping.

"shin hye'ah! i have to go do the groceries, alasseo?" her mom reminded.

"alasseo eomma!" shin hye said.

and so her mom went to buy groceries while shin hye went to explore the house.

"this house is so big!" shin hye thought.

shin hye heard someone entered at the door and thought it was her mom.

"eomma? did you forgot something?" shin hye asked.

shin hye turned around and saw that it wasn't her mom but a familiar face.

"geun suk'ssi?" shin hye wondered.

"neo!what are you doing here!?" geun suk shouted.

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:-V hope u enjoy it :-V


compare with a big box, seems like happiness is found in a small box :3
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Re: An Annoying Girl 13 years 2 months ago #37452

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I enjoy it :) :)
I wish you are feeling better now sachiko12:luvluv:
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Re: An Annoying Girl 13 years 2 months ago #37453

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@Humilis

thank u for enjoying my fanfic :shy:

i'm feeling better now :D

my only problem is... :onhot:

i need to focus on my studies so i'll be accepted to turn a high school student :imdead:

you guys will decide when i will continue my next chapter :pray:

i just hope that i will succeed this year :pray:


compare with a big box, seems like happiness is found in a small box :3
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Re: An Annoying Girl 13 years 2 months ago #37462

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@sachiko

dont worry if u will be late to post youre nxt chapter....

but dont let your studies failed...

keep it up girl.!!

i know you can do it...

i know that u can succed it....

go for your DREAMS girl..!!!

we all waiting for your nxt chapter...

kekekeke ...... :-V :-V :wahaha


we all be proud to you....




continue itt...



~ LOVE YAH ~ :kiss: :kiss: :kiss:
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Re: An Annoying Girl 13 years 2 months ago #37475

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@ Sachiko, thanks for another giggling chapter, and Im sorry for hurrying you to make another chapter :imdead: , Im just excited,you know :shy: same with the other, i praised your talented mind, keep reaching for the STAR, i knew someday, somehow you will be the one you want to be.... Pshic is in your back, we supported you as long as you want us, THANKS!!! :luvluv:
"action speaks louder than voice"

...Too Fast to LIVE, Too Young to DIE...
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Re: An Annoying Girl 13 years 2 months ago #37521

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oh man.... :1

i got a really bad headache... :sickr:

is it okay for you all to wait a bit longer? :imdead:

i'm really sorry :(

hope u can understand me :pray:
:sickr: :bye:


compare with a big box, seems like happiness is found in a small box :3
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Re: An Annoying Girl 13 years 2 months ago #37525

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Dearest Abby12,
Don't feel guilty, your fan here sure could wait and understand your situation.
Please don't headache, concentrate at your studies.
Study is your priority.....:-V :-V :-V :-V
FIGHTING Dear ABBY...
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Re: An Annoying Girl 13 years 2 months ago #37526

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@elankham

thank you very much for understanding my situation right now... :kiss1:

i'm already slow to type the keyboard right now... :S

i'm too stubborn enough that i'm still using the computer when i am still sick so bad... :imdead:

you can suggest on when i will continue my next chapter... :pray:

god bless you all :pray: :imdead: :bye:


compare with a big box, seems like happiness is found in a small box :3
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Re: An Annoying Girl 13 years 2 months ago #37752

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NIIICCCCEEE!!!! :ding: :ding: :ding: Looking forward for the next topic.....
psh/jks forever
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Re: An Annoying Girl 13 years 2 months ago #37786

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i got worse on my sickness...
but i still wanted to finish my fanfic
hope u enjoy it....
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Chapter 6


"geun suk'ssi?" shin hye wondered.

"neo!what are you doing here!?" geun suk shouted.

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"it is you...ah-...ahhh...joesonghabnida, geun suk'ssi" shin hye apologized.

"what are you doing in my house, shin hye'ssi?" geun suk asked.

"i didn't know this is your house! you see, my mom is a friend of dong sup'ssi and.." geun suk interrupted shin hye.

"our manager, dong sup'ssi!?" geun suk shockingly asked.

"ye-...wait...he is your manager!?" shin hye loudly asked.

geun suk nodded then shin hye explained everything to him.

"dong sup'ssi let you borrow my house!? aishhh" geun suk uttered. :angry1

"by the way, where is your mom?" geun suk asked.

"she went grocery shopping and she even doesn't know that someone lives here" shin hye said.

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"hye sun!" dong sup called.

"oh! you called dong sup?" hye sun said.

"mianhaeyo, there's someone already living at the house your living right now." dong sup explained.

"what!? is that person still there!? shin hye is still in the house!" hye sun shouted. :OMG

"what? your not at the house? yes, the person who is already living there is still there" dong sup explained then hye sun hang up the phone.

hye sun rushed outside and went to the house leaving her cart full of foods.

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"shin hye'ah! gwaenchanha!?" her mom loudly asked shin hye.

"eomma, your ba-....i thought you went grocery shopping?" shin hye asked when she saw her mom with empty hands.

"oh! and by the way...there is someone already living here..." shin hye nervously explained.

"you know, shin hye?" her mom asked.

"oh! did dong sup'ssi already told you?" shin hye asked then her mom nodded.

"did you know him, shin hye" her mom asked.

shin hye nodded "he came on my birthday, remember?" shin hye reminded.

"ahhhh...now i remember" her mom said calmly.

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"full of traffic, how can we move to a new house?" shin hye wondered.

"uh-....you can stay here for a little while" geun suk said.

"jeongmal!? gamsahabnida, geun suk'ssi" shin hye said with a sweet smile that made geun suk smile.

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"eomma!there's no food in the fridge and i'm really getting hungry!" shin hye reminded and her tummy grumbled.

"i'm still packing your things, shin hye. you do the grocery shopping with geun suk'ssi" her mom said and smirked.

"what!?" shin hye yelled.

"eh!?" geun suk startled.

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"geun suk'ssi, i will get the food and you move the cart, alasseo?" shin hye explained.

"how about you do the groceries and i hide the whole day." geun suk said with a pissed off face.

"ah-...geun suk'ssi, you should help me a bit, you know" shin hye pouted.

"why would you do that anyway?" shin hye asked while looking at the grocery list.

"shin hye'ssi, do you know me?" geun suk asked.

"i do but i don't want to" shin hye replied.

"yah, what kind of answer is that?" geun suk asked with an irritated face.

"i dislike fan clubs especially famous people." shin hye explained that made geun suk pissed off more.

"then what am i?" geun suk asked.

"you're a famous-....wait...you have to hide from your fans, geun suk'ssi?" shin hye nervously asked.

"if their already here, your cart might be already crashed." geun suk explained.

"joesongahabnida" shin hye apologized.

shn hye kept continuing her grocery shopping while geun suk kept trying to hide from others.

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"geun suk'ssi! we're almost done! you can almost take off your hood!" shin hye happily said but geun suk didn't listen.

shin hye and geun suk was waiting at the line and geun suk didn't hold his hood then suddenly...a fan above geun suk blew his hood away from his face and got everyone's attention.

"oh! it's Jang Geun Suk!!!" everyone yelled.

the fans of geun suk rushed to geun suk and they actually bump shin hye away from him and shin hye crossed a sharp object while she being bumped away and scratch her arm "aya!" shin hye yelled but the only one who got her attention is geun suk.

"shin hye'ssi!" geun suk yelled as he rushed to shin hye at the floor. :willing

"kwaenchanhaeyo?" geun suk worriedly asked to shin hye. :kiss1:

"ye" shin hye nodded.

the fans' attention went to both of them since they saw geun suk all worried to shin hye. is this love? :luvluv:

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"shin hye'ssi, wait here while i get something to heal that for you." geun suk said.

"ye" shin hye nodded.

geun suk went to get something to stop the bleeding on her wound.

"did the fans bumped you like that?" geun suk said while stopping the bleeding on her wound.

shin hye nodded and watched geun suk how he heals her wound on how gentle and caring he is to her that made her heart beat fast.

a few moments later, both of them heard someone entering the door and shin hye thought it's another fan and geun suk thought it's manager dong sup'ssi.

"geun suk" ???
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a mystery huh?

you have to guess who entered the house all of a sudden and comment it quickly tnx :bye: :-V


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