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Never experience Love 13 years 4 weeks ago #42298

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Park Shin Hye

shin hye is a poor,shy but smart and kind girl who studies in Suji High School. In her new school, Hyupsung High School, guys always gets attractive to shin hye because of her kindness, and charms except for "The Boss". Even the Most Richest Handsome "Prince" didn't affect her on experiencing love.
A5:"The A5's admirable commoner"


Jang Geun Suk

geun suk is a rich, scary, and a bully in Hyupsung High School, also known as "The Boss". Many girls has a crush on him even though he is a bully who doesn't want anything to get out on his way. He's the leader of All Four, also known as "A4", a group who are the most richest and well known in school. A4 knew each other since they were kids and even attended Hyupsung High School together so they need to make a group to know who are those you should respect on. He too doesn't experience love just like shin hye even though soo jin is always with him.
A4: "The A4's Boss"


Jung Yong Hwa

yong hwa is the kind,calm, smart,rich "Prince".He realize that his soulmate is shin hye. His promise to himself is to never let go of that soulmate he has finally founded. He is one of the A4 who are well known in Hyupsung High School. Many girls wanted to be with him, date him and even marry him but, his mind are only to shin hye that made them jealous and so as so eun.
A4: "The A4's Prince"


Park Soo Jin

soo jin is the no.1 model in Hyupsung High School. She is the only female friend in Hyupsung High School that shin hye got. She get's jealous when she saw geun suk and shin hye are together. She is the same age as yong hwa. She is also one of the A4 by being the richest model and well known since then. The "A4's model" she is in love with geun suk ever since in elementary.
A4: "The A4's No.1 Model"


Kim So Eun

so eun is the cutest and admirable but when she talks to shin hye privately, she scares her and tells her not to get in touch with yong hwa. Her eyes always grow big whenever yong hwa does something for shin hye. She is the youngest one in A4.
A4: "The A4's Cutest Doll"


Synopsis:
shin hye got accepted by the owner of the Hyupsung High School and insisted to let her study there then on the fees, they made it much lower for them to afford. shin hye never experienced love and thought it was only a mist. When the "A4" entered the school, they didn't notice the new commoner, but shin hye notice clearly the well-learned rich students. Everybody is attracted to "A4". since shin hye is being admired by others, What if she will become one of the "A4"? will she finally experience love?


compare with a big box, seems like happiness is found in a small box :3
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Re: Never experience Love 13 years 4 weeks ago #42341

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Excited ! and waiting for more. Please please :)
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Re: Never experience Love 13 years 3 weeks ago #42442

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Chapter 1

"shin hye! shin hye!" her best friend, Lee Min Ji, called shin hye for a favor.

"what is it, min ji?" shin hye asked.

"i have a challenge again for them. if they can still finish it, a big amount will they get." min ji explained.

"i'm quite pitiful for them" shin hye said.

"don't worry, i'll take care of what's going to happen to them." min ji told shin hye.

min ji begins the challenge and shin hye begins to speak while the five challengers keep eating.

"a guy that slips on the floor...a cockroach accidentally went to his mouth..." shin hye said then one challenger stops and loses.

"a dog that is sick...keeps on vomiting worms like rice...eyes keeps on looking around like zombies...blood flows down like a slime that is like one of your soup..." and two challengers stops and went to the restroom to vomit and min ji keeps on laughing.

"an old lunch box with a sushi filled with worms going back and forth and back and forth...." then another one gets dizzy and gets off his chair. that leaves one last challenger.

"can you still finish it?" min ji asked but the challenger didn't reply.

"an ice cream man delivers an ice cream to a boy...cherry turns into a slimy eyeball...toppings turn into baby's vomit...and the ice cream scoop that looks like a garbage of dead people..." and finally, the challenger gets up and vomits to his lunch box.

"yes! shin hye, you did it!" min ji said.

"now i have no appetite..." shin hye said to herself.

min ji gave her money to thank her for her favor.

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shin hye get home from school and saw her mom talking to someone on the phone.

"oh, shin hye!" her mom was surprise to see shin hye so suddenly and shin hye greeted her.

"shin hye come over here." her mom said and leaded shin hye to the table.

"what is it, eomma?" shin hye asked curiously.

"you just saw me talking to someone on the phone, right?" her mom asked.

"ne eomma...who was that on the phone anyway?" shin hye nodded and asked curiously.

"do you remember getting a test in Hyupsung High School where they didn't accepted you?" her mom asked.

"ne eomma, they didn't accepted me because they only accept rich people, but i like Suji High School, why do you ask eomma? was that from the Hyupsung High School?" shin hye asked.

"they told me that no one got higher scores than you, so they accepted you" her mom said.

"but what about the school fees and i already got enrolled in Suji High School?" shin hye asked.

"they lowered it just for you to enroll there" her mom replied.

"when will i go there?" shin hye asked.

"you can bid goodbye to your friends so i settled it next week" her mom said.

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"shin hye! why would you go there!? don't you know they despite commoners!?" min ji asked loudly.

"before i went here, i tried to enroll to that school" shin hye said.

"ahh~ fine. shin hye, if you ever got troubles there, call me immediately and i'll kick those butts out" min ji said then shin hye laughed and hugged her.

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"shin hye! shin hye! take care! we'll miss you!" all her classmates shouted when shin hye was about to leave.

"shin hye....no matter where you go...you'll always be my bestest friend" min ji said.

"min ji...no matter what happens...you'll always be my bestest friend" shin hye said.

shin hye left with her tears kept on flowing on her cheeks.

-

"it's so big~" shin hye said while looking at the big school.

when shin hye entered, the students kept on looking at her.

"excuse me, what classroom am i settled?" shin hye asked the secretary.

"what's your name?" the secretary asked.

"nan Park Shin Hye ibnida" shin hye introduced herself and the secretary got surprised and smiled at her.

"ahhh~ the principal was expecting you!" the secretary said then shin hye went to the principal's office.

"excuse me~ i was sent here to meet with the principal." shin hye said.

"who is it!?" the principal shouted that made shin hye nervous more.

"ahhh~ joesonghabnida, Ms. Shin Hye" the principal greeted when she saw shin hye.

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"didn't you know that no one ever got higher scores than yours?" the principal asked with a smile.

"ye, my mother told me, was that the only reason why you accepted me here?" shin hye asked politely.

"when you got a test here, i was observing you, i knew you weren't like the other students here, but you're much more mature, you're attitude makes many people happy, not ones that are in this school who spends time for themselves and does not care whether they're grades won't make they're parents happy, you're the first commoner who got accepted in this school, and i wish you will do good in here." the principal explained and made shin hye happy.

"gamsahabnida, anyway, what classroom am i settled?" shin hye askes sheepishly.

"don't worry i'll escort you" the principal said with a bright smile.

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shin hye went out and waited for the principal and then...

"the A4's are here! the A4's are here!" a guy said.

"A4?" shin hye wondered curiously.

"make way!" a girl said to everyone including shin hye.

when the A4 entered, all of them can only see their shadows because of the bright light.


compare with a big box, seems like happiness is found in a small box :3
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Re: Never experience Love 13 years 3 weeks ago #42774

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Chapter 2

"Miss Park Shin hye, shall we go?" the principal asked.

"oh-....ohhh,ye." shin hye accepted and didn't catch up on seeing the A4.

-

"there is a new student i will introduce to you." the principal said then the students went all chattering up.

"but why does the new student come to school so late when the first day of school started already last month?" a student asked.

"my acceptance for her to enroll here was late" the principal said.

"this is the first time a student here would come to school so late."" only commoners can arrive so late" the students murmured.

shin hye entered the classroom nervously and the students stared at her.

"this is your new classmate, Miss Park Shin Hye." the principal introduced her happily.

"annyeonghaseyo, jeon Park Shin Hye ibnida, nice to meet you all." shin hye greeted them respectfully that made them including the principal, delightful.

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it's break time and shin hye is still wandering who were the ones called "A4".

"ah-..shin hye'ssi! annyeonghaseyo, jeon Lee DongHae ibnida" dong hae introduced himself to shin hye very happy towards her.


"ahhhh....annyeonghaseyo" shin hye greeted him politely.

"i guess we're the same here in this class, i thought i was the only one." dong hae said then chuckled.

"what do you mean by that?" shin hye asked shyly.

"we're the only new ones in this classroom." dong hae said.

"ahh..is that so.." shin hye said.

"ah! anyway, whom are they talking about the ones called "A4"?" shin hye asked curiously.

"ahhh...the A4 is the most richest and well-known here." dong hae replied.

"well-know?" shin hye asked.

"they enrolled here at the first time the Hyupsung High School begin." dong hae said.

"really?" shin hye wondered.

"but what classroom are they?" shin hye asked.

"we're in luck, their classroom is our classroom." dong hae said.

"mwo!?" shin hye whispered.

"they only attend class after break time, of course since the principal likes you, she will introduce them to us first" dong hae said.

"ohhhh" shin hye understood.

-

"since there are new students here, we're going to introduce you the A4." the teacher said that made shin hye surprised and excited.

"Mr. Jang Geun Suk."


"Ms. Park Soo Jin"


"and Ms. Kim So Eun"


"huh? they said that it's A4, but why they are only three of them?" shin hye asked dong hae confused.

"that's what i was wondering too" dong hae said.

"i guess the other member will arrive after lunch time" the teacher said that made the students disappointed.

"why are they disappointed?" shin hye asked.

"i'll tell you the details at lunch time." dong hae said.

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"dong hae'ssi, why are they so sad since the other one didn't go to the classroom a while ago?" shin hye asked curiously.

"do you want to know their A4 names?" dong hae asked her.

"ne?" shin hye didn't understood.

"Jang Geun Suk, what do you think of him?" dong hae asked.

"geun suk'ssi? hmm...he looks scary...compared to his looks, he does seems like a billionaire." shin hye said.

"that's right, he was the one who decided to make a group called A4." dong hae said.

"what about Park Soo Jin?" dong hae asked.

"she's really pretty, and she does have the body what guys want for a girl." shin hye said.

"she and geun suk are the first couple and that's why she's the No.1 Model in this school." dong hae explained.

"Kim So Eun? she looks like a girl's doll, and basic on her attitude, she must be a well-mannered lady." shin hye said.

"she and the other A4 member are the second couple." dong hae said.

"so you mean that the one that didn't go to class a while ago is a guy?" shin hye asked.

"that's right...oh i almost forgot! i have to tell you their names as A4 members." dong hae said that made shin hye interested then dong hae shows her a photo of them.

"since Jang Geun Suk is the first one to decide the group, He is the A4's Boss"
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"soo jin'ssi is a model here, but she does well in her grades not like the others who show off oftenly. She is the A4's No.1 Model."
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"Kim So Eun'ssi is like a princess since she and the other member are the second couple, but when she saw him with another girl, she makes sure that girl is miserable. She is the A4's Cutest Doll."
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"dong hae, how did you get this photos? and how did you know their information?" shin hye asked.

"i'm a photographer, i observe them so i will have a good future." dong hae said.

"what about the last one?" shin hye asked.

"ohhhh...the other one is a smart and kind one but he doesn't smile often. he is the A4's Prince."
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"Prince?oh-...he does look like a gentleman." shin hye said while looking at the picture.

the bell rang and it's time for them to go back to their classroom.

-

"yah!the A4's Prince is here!" a girl student then all other girl, except shin hye, screamed to see him. :luvluv:


compare with a big box, seems like happiness is found in a small box :3
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Re: Never experience Love 13 years 3 weeks ago #42795

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Good job !!! Thanks so much for more and I enjoy to read your fanfics so much :)
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Re: Never experience Love 13 years 3 weeks ago #44020

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Chapter 3

shin hye didn't know that the A4's Prince is here because she's still finishing her assignment that she wants to finish it up at school so she won't do it at home.

Luckily, she didn't realize she was heading towards him and they actually bumped each other.

"ah-... joesonghabnida." shin hye apologized without even looking at him.

when shin hye continued, he watches her pass him like his just a stranger.

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"eomma, i'm home!" shin hye alarmed her mom that she's home.

"oh-..shin hye, your back. do you want something to eat?" her mom asked.

"aniyo. i'm going upstairs." shin hye said, heading towards the stairs.

"change your clothes and wash your hands, dinner is almost ready." her mother reminded.

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shin hye's phone is ringing when she entered her room.

"shin hye!" min ji called at shin hye's phone.

"oh-..min ji...it's good to talk to you again" shin hye said.

"do you have troubles at your new school? if they're doing something bad to you, tell me." min ji said.

"geuge aniya. I already made a new friend. and the principal is very kind to me. there's nothing to worry about." shin hye said.

"that's good. ah! by the way, the school you entered, is the most expensive and unacceptable to enroll if you are not rich enough. there are no news that a commoner would actually be accepted there. that means you are they very first one who enrolled there and foremost you are the exact opposite of them all." min ji explained.

"it doesn't matter." shin hye said.

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shin hye entered the gate, thinking of what will the A4's Prince look like. looking at the time, she never gets late.will my life always be like this till the end? or...will she never experience the so-called-love?

shin hye sat on her chair when dong hae suddenly called her.

"shin hye! shin hye!" dong hae kept on calling her.

"what is it?" shin hye asked while looking at dong hae at her back.

"didn't you realize whom you bumped yesterday when you were on your way out to school?" dong hae asked.

"ani, wae?" shin hye asked as her mind reminded of what happened yesterday.

"the one who bumped you before was..." dong hae suddenly stopped when someone approaches at the backside of shin hye.

"who?" shin hye asked as she keeps staring at dong hae who froze at the second he was about to say the person he was referring to.

"dong hae! dong hae! why aren't you moving?" shin hye asked then dong hae slowly takes a camera out of his bag and tries to take a picture of him. shin hye looked then...she froze as well. the guy charmingly smiled at her.

"dong hae...that's...that's..."

"Jung Yong Hwa." dong hae continued.


"are you new here?" yong hwa politely asked.

"ye." shin hye nodded. yong hwa held shin hye's hands.

"i hope we get along better." yong hwa said. shin hye just smiled and dong hae looked at him and felt a bit...jealous.

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shin hye went to the rooftop for some fresh air. she thought about what yong hwa said to her awhile ago. hse tried calling min ji but she's busy. dong hae tried to picture the other A4s. i don't have any female friends here. then suddenly, someone entered...it was yong hwa.

"ah-...yong hwa'ssi, what are you doing here?" shin hye asked looking straightly to him.

"oh-....shin hye'ssi, i just came to get some fresh air but if you need some privacy i'll wait inside." yong hwa said leaving the door opened.

"no, you can join." shin hye said.

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they both looked at the clouds and think about what to say.

"how did you know my name anyway?" shin hye asked curiously.

"most of the guys kept on talking about you." yong hwa grinned.

"ehh!?" shin hye was surprised.

"never thought you were so attractive." yong hwa said.

shin hye blushed and turned away.

"they said you don't smile very often." shin hye said with her finger kept beating to the wall.

"my life is always the same. i got used to it. i don't know what to do now." yong hwa said.

"me too. never getting late" : shin hye

"getting people's attention" : yong hwa

"being kind to others" : shin hye

"getting good grades" : yong hwa

yong hwa realizes that they actually compared to what their life has been doing. to what his relative said, she must be his soulmate!


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Re: Never experience Love 13 years 2 weeks ago #44084

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Thank you dear sachiko12 :)

How is your school? You are on school break, aren't you?:nitey: :nitey:

Looking forward for the next chapter.:pray: :pray:
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Humilis wrote:
Thank you dear sachiko12 :)

How is your school? You are on school break, aren't you?:nitey: :nitey:

Looking forward for the next chapter.:pray: :pray:

thank you Humilis :) :shy:

i'm turning high school now. since it's summer now, i'm kinda bored to what i'm doing lately. :onhot:

seeing all who like my fanfic makes my heart felt really good like i have never felt before. :heartsh:

thank you for liking my fanfic :bye:


compare with a big box, seems like happiness is found in a small box :3
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Correlation Chart



red line - love

red line w/ heart - love each other

orange line - friendship

yellow line - enemies


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I want more, more, more...please hurry up and give us more!
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