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Re: LOVE BATTLE!! 12 years 10 months ago #48264

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My jaymie

hahaha first want thank you for chatting with me...I really enjoyed to share my knowledge about the couple

I really love talking to you on the phone, chatting and messaging on your inbox...

and now want to share how I feel after reading your fanfic...CHAPTER 18 AND CHAPTER 19

though you include again another character in this Love Battle Fanfic...and I did not even

that this girl will going to be her number 1 enemy in this fanfic...I feel i little bit sad...as i told you jaymie

that even it just a fanfic...I can't endure to see Shin Hye getting hurt of this girl...I'm selfish when it comes

to the couple...I just want Sukkie being paired to Shin Hye ...hahaha ...I don't want other girl being paired

to Sukkie...but it's fine with me that Shin Hye being paired with so many hunks like King Hyun Jung and

a lot more...I want to see Sukkie got jealous so He can't realized how much she Love Shin HYe...This my

my own opinion jaymie ....just for fantic and for REAL hahahaha... :touched :touched

anyway ...want to hug and kiss you for this another 2 chapters... Jaymie I told you before that chapter 17 is

my most favorite chapter...but I change my mind again because of this new Chapter 19...I love Sukkie how

he show her love to Shin hye though its barbaric...animalistic....still Sukkie is cute here and I love to Shin Hye

here also...even know she call them bitch...I like the way she show her love to Sukkie even he give her tiring

action...like need to run and run so she can met him ....wow...even me didn't do that to my husband...now I miss

my husband terrible because of your fanfic.... :superkiss:

and my dear jaymie don't forget my request the concept that i like...even it short story...just the two of them...hahahaha

love you jamie...thank you again and wait your 2 chapter again ...20 and 21 hahaha hope tomorrow you will going

to post it....hahaha don't let MGY hurt our Shin Hye...I going to die...hahaha :imdead: :imdead:
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Re: LOVE BATTLE!! 12 years 10 months ago #48280

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Jaymie unni,

I'm really thankful for the chapter 18 and 19 and it was so good that my sleepy eyes became widen and alive!

I wish I could kiss hong ki too =D =D =D

I'm really looking forward for the next chapters! keep it up! :bingo: :bye: :nitey:


compare with a big box, seems like happiness is found in a small box :3
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Re: LOVE BATTLE!! 12 years 10 months ago #48632

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I wish for more, more and more :piggyrabbit :piggyrabbit :piggyrabbit Thanks for a very nice chapters :) :) :)
psh/jks forever
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love Battle Chapter 20 12 years 9 months ago #51933

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Chapter 20: Couple.. Officially but secretly.

"hey! Dongjjoj's jjang is here"

I heard the girls whispering with one another. I don't have in a mood to listen
to them because of my cold that I didn't get what they said.

He showed up in my class that surprised me.

​Wearing that kind of look that only me who will understand.

​And when he knew that everyone’s not looking, he winked at me, and literally,
my whole face turned red.

​“By the way, Park Shin Hye.."he then stopped in front of my desk that made me
gasp!

​What is he doing?

​Why is he talking to me?

​And what’s up with Park Shin Hye?

​Giving him a glare first, I sneered. “Are you talking to me?”

​He chuckled that makes me want to kick him, obviously he’s picking on me! And
he’s intentionally doing it in front of my class!

​“I’m looking at you right?” he asked back, “Anyway, I need to consult you about
something.” He continued, hiding his naughty smile on his lips, “I made a
condition with my girlfriend yesterday, do you think she’ll agree?”

​I gasped.

​Quote that out!

​Did he just say GIRLFRIEND?

​Spelled, G.I.R.L.F.R.I.E.N.D.

​“Hey!” he called my attention when I spaced out, “What do you think?”

​My face automatically turned red when I realized that he’s watching me.

​“Why are you asking me? How should I know?” I asked, looking away.

Damn it! I couldn’t just meet his eyes! And what the hell! My heart fell out of
its place!

​Did he really say girlfriend?

​Can I die right now?

​Geun Suk shrugged his shoulders, “Well, it’s because you know her right?”

​I bit my lower lip when everyone in the class gasped! This jerk! What is he
doing! Sprouting nonsense! Is he delirious or something?!

​“Come on… tell me…” he pushed that made me stand up, and without any hints, I
punched him on his stomach!

​“Jerk! I don’t know what you’re talking about!” I hissed then walked away.
Leaving everyone’s jaw dropped while Geun Suk is just chuckling amusingly.
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​“Hey! Geun Suk!" I yelled with my hands on my hips, straightly looking to where
he is!
​He’s in that pub with Yong Hwa and Hongki and drinking freely as if he didn’t
do anything weird at my school this morning!

​“Oops! The fighting toy is here!” Hongki murmured after he saw me.

​I marched all the way to where they are.

​“What are you up to? And who’s your girlfriend?” I asked loudly as soon as I
stopped in front of them.

​Geun Suk just chuckled and then stood up, “Good thing you’re here.” He said
that puzzled me.

​“Wha…?”

​“Come.” Then he pulled me beside him and jailed me in his arms. Pasting my face
to his chest. “I’m sick and tired of people calling you as my toy.” He said that
made my eyes widened.

​What is the relevance to what he’s saying to my purpose of going there?

​This jerk really is…!

​“From now on, you’re my girlfriend!” he declared that totally stunned me!

​I’m not deaf right? He did say that I’m his girlfriend right?

​Geun Suk then looked at his friends, “This girl is only mine. Dare to object
you’re dead.”

​I blinked.

​Unbelievable!

​Is this really happening? I’m not dreaming right?

I’m not just making up what I heard right?

​Hongki shrugged his shoulders, then he stood up, “Then, cheers for the fighting
girlfriend.” He said and then offered his bottle in the air.

​Yong Hwa stood up too, holding his bottle with him while Geun Suk took his own
beer from the table and clinked them together with Hongki's.

​“For the Fighting girlfriend.” Yong Hwa seconded that made all of them laugh.

​It’s because I was too drown with the different kinds of emotions that’s
pouring inside me that it took a while to sink in to my system how they called
me!

​And then…

​From Geun Suk's chest, I looked to all of them!

​“What fighting girlfriend?!” I nagged but all of them just laughed!
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"at last, he already admitted to himself" Hongki said between drinking.

"yeah. Good for them. But it's only the beginning. I hope they can do it until
the end" Yong Hwa said

"what do you mean? Now that you mentioned it, they said to keep it a secret-
their relationship" Hong ki said

"is it because of her brother?" he added

"there's still her brother. But remember, Geun Young is back" Yong Hwa said

"you're right. That girl is head over heels to Geun Suk. I hope she won't do
anything harmful"
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​“I have to go home now, I still need to catch the last bullet train and…”

I automatically stopped talking when Geun Suk squeezed me tightly. We were inside
his car, Yong Hwa and Hongki stayed at the pub.

​“What bullet train? Want me to kill you?” he asked that made me smile.

"but I need to answer my brother's call. I have a curfew you know." I explained
then suddenly a call from Kim Bum came.

"see?" I said showing him the caller Id.

"hello?"

"where are you? It's already 7:30, what are you doing?" Kim Bum nagged from the
other line.

"give it to me." he meant the phone.

"is this Park Kim Bum?" he asked

"jjang? Yes I am" Kim Bum nervously answered.

"I'll bring home your sister at exactly 10pm, take care of your big brother" he
said

"I got it jjang"

My jaw dropped as soon as he hung up the phone. This guy.. this guy really do what he wants. He does everything in his own pace.

"is there any more problem?" Geun Suk asked while giving me back my phone.

​“No…” I answered.

​“Then stay beside me, don’t leave me until I tell you so.” He ordered, but
instead of protesting, I nodded lightly.

​“Okay…”

​I don’t know how, I don’t know why but I found my self loving this devil punk
so much.

I love him so much that my heart feels like exploding from this overwhelming
feeling.
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Re: love Battle Chapter 20 12 years 9 months ago #51943

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=X =X i'm eally waiting for this..tq,tq,tq,
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Re: LOVE BATTLE!! 12 years 9 months ago #52086

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Thank you so much, I thought you wouldn't update the "Love battle". :luvluv: :luvluv:
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Re: LOVE BATTLE!! 12 years 9 months ago #52090

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dear jaymie

finally, the long awaited update is here

despite your busy schedule you managed to drop by and share another chapter with us

thank you, thank you, thank you so much
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so now she's his GIRLFRIEND eh

weeeeeee, super like it
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Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret!

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